solved An introductory paragraph that begins by describing the fantasy or

An introductory paragraph that begins by describing the fantasy or  other leisure activity and how it works and ends with a thesis statement  that contains two reasons you enjoy the activity
A body paragraph, which you wrote last week, that discusses your  first reason and that has been revised with corrections based on  feedback your professor provided
A second body paragraph that begins with a topic sentence  that focuses on the second reason you like the activity and includes  support for that reason, such as examples, description, and explanation
A concluding paragraph that reemphasizes your main idea and draws the essay to a close