solved Here are the main issues that led to a mis-direction

Here are the main issues that led to a mis-direction in the concept paper:
1)Who are you? (what is your expertise and what organization are you with…). You need to elaborate on how you are connected to the elderly and the nursing home demographic.
a.I am connected because for may years my grandmother worked in a nursing home and the living arrangements there were horrible, but there was not enough funding being given to them
2)Establish a geographic area for creating change (your local county or city). The concept paper is broad and does not select a specific area for allocating funds. I suggest selecting a particular nursing home for your grant proposal to make it manageable for this project.
a.Local area- Eunice, Louisiana
b.Nursing Home: Eunice Manor
3)What exactly is your specific desired change? I would select one item for positive social change in a specific nursing home.
a.Choose a change of choice
4) Give detailed statistics to support your need for change. Assure that the need for change is identified!!!
5) Made sure assignment is in APA 7th edition
6) Please steer clear of using the word “us or we”, identify who you are speaking about or referencing
Part 1
Grant Proposal Project: Introduction
You will use this document as your primary guide for writing all sections and components of your Proposal.

A Guide to Proposal Planning and Writing (Miner and Miner, 1998)

The Introduction of your Grant Proposal will include a clear credibility statement establishing your organization and its goals link your project to the funding agency’s priorities and is clearly relevant to families. Review the section titled “Introduction” in the guide linked above for more specific details. 
The following document may also be helpful as a secondary source in writing your Proposal:

Congressional Research Service How to Develop and Write a Grant Proposal

Always review the associated rubric and use proper APA format in your assignments. 
PART 2 
Grant Proposal Project: Statement of Problem or Need
You will use this document as your primary guide for writing all sections and components of your Proposal.

A Guide to Proposal Planning and Writing (Miner and Miner, 1998)

The Statement of Problem/Need section of your Grant Proposal will represent the reason for your proposal, specific condition(s) to be changed, statistics from authoritative resources, and more. Review the section titled “Statement of Problem/Need” in the guide linked above for more specific details. 
The following document may also be helpful as a secondary source in writing your Proposal:

Congressional Research Service How to Develop and Write a Grant Proposal