solved Check my response to your rough draft. Please be reminded

Check my response to your rough draft. Please be reminded to read something now posted, a Warning about the rough draft grade. Read the response to the rough draft, paying almost no attention to the rough draft grade itself. is the word count 1,000-1,100 words?2. does the paper cite 5-8 sources?3. does the paper list those 5-8 sources on the Works Cited page?Because a student could send a correct paper that is too short, perhaps 700 words with 4 sources, due perhaps to the student having a busy week, that student has to receive a “quantity grade”; the student has 80% of the research for 70% of the word count. That means the student would make an F rough draft grade. Otherwise, the student may have made no mistakes at all. But it’s an F.On the other hand, a student may send a 1,050 word paper with 7 sources, 7 sources listed and cited with parentheses. That student would make a 99 grade, but if my comments point out misspellings, subject/verb disagreement, sentence structure, no quoting, “no you” violations, etc., the paper is poor quality. A student receiving a 99 rough draft grade has to act on my comments, not the grade; the grade is not related to how well a Final Draft with the same mistakes would score.2. Check your paper for parentheses citing sources, Works Cited formatting, ABC order on the Works Cited, the “no you” rule, consistent quoting, naming people as a habit, identifying an opponent, argument, grammar, etc., all in accordance with my feedback to your rough draft. The Final Draft can be considered complete with 5-8 sources3. Rewatch the video posted last week as part of improving your paper. There is a Rubric video that will be posted on Oct 5 or 6. Please wait for that video to post. https://lenoircc.mediasite.mcnc.org/mcnc/Play/c7b1…https://lenoircc.mediasite.mcnc.org/mcnc/Play/acac…4. Please let me know if you have any questions. After addressing your paper, do not send until you have proofread. Proofreading tends to require re-reading more than just once or even twice. You should re-read your paper in order and from bottom to top, as well as random sequences at a time. Please send your Final Draft on/before October 10.What to correct on paper (Professor’s Feedback)Capitalize the words in your Eng 112 titles. experienced (Diamond, pg.22). He also- there is no page number to mention herearticle “The worst mistake in the history of the human race,” Jared Diamond- more capitalization is needed hereReferences = Works Cited ——– follow Short Folder rule #11, which we’ve covered in J#1 and J#2. This Works Cited is the title students see in the Sample Paper and the video about that paper.violence (Arriaga, pg.63).- Short Folder rule #8 does not use page numbers. Delete all in-parentheses page numbers. You have about 23 words in quotes in this paper. Quote more often, or if not more often then more substantially. Do not quote for more than 3 lines at a time, but you need longer quoting. Therefore, Jared Diamond is wrong to state that agriculture is the worst mistake in the history of humankind. In– it takes the paper too long to state a point that makes it redundant. The paper never uses the word “worst” to apply to the topic you chose. It should do that. aggression.” October, 3, 2021– which comma is not correct?Thank you for sending. The paper is currently a D or probably a C. Please address of this feedback that you can. Let me know if you have any questions.