solved My essay main argument points:Â Stop use wild animal elements

My essay main argument points: 
Stop use wild animal elements in TCM is good because there are many substitutions use in TCM and policies help protect wild animals so that make people more participate in protecting them.
Muse use at least 2 resources from here:

reading 1: Qiu, Jane.“When the East Meets the West: The Future of Traditional Chinese Medicine in the 21st Century.” National Science Review, vol. 2, no. 3, 1 Sept. 2015, pp. 377–380.  https://academic.oup.com/nsr/article/2/3/377/1429424
reading 2: Michael. “What It’s Like to Trip on the Most Potent Magic Mushroom.” The Atlantic, June 2018. (see attached file)
reading 3:Mike. “American Exorcism” The Atlantic, December 2018 (see attached file)
reading 4: “Science, Pseudoscience, and Nonsense.” Journal of College Science Teaching, vol. 45, no. 5, 2016, pp. 61-65 (see attached file)