solved Tech MirrorIn the twenty-first century, technology ariseIt comes with social

Tech MirrorIn the twenty-first century, technology ariseIt comes with social media, whatsapp, Facebook and InstagramAnd a constant stream of services and products ariseEveryone is connected, the society has changedAn so has the self perceptionOur self-image has been influencedAdolescents self-esteem has taken a diveCentral to our lives, self-worth is measured by the number of likesFewer likes for poor body image “Sadness and devastation arise, for those with low profiling or fewer friend”Mass media defines our cultureMedia has shaped and permeated the diet culturePhotoshopped images of men and women rule the internet “to enhance their beauty, with artificial intelligent apps”Reality and falsification cannot be told apartYet we all feel attached to the technologyAlmost everyone has become a pet to the technologyBeauty is the king of social mediaDisadvantages are slowly outmatching the advantagesMany are unaware of the unrealistic standards “they all look real, except in reality”Yet we judge on the social media presenceAwareness is necessary, social reform is neededReferencesBalintec, V. (2019, March 15). The bigger picture: How technology affects body image — The unaffiliated press. The Unaffiliated Press. https://www.unaffiliatedpress.ca/article/2019/3/15/the-bigger-picture-on-how-tech nology-affects-body-imageHope. (2019, July 31). How technology and social media influences body image. Eating Disorder Hope. https://www.eatingdisorderhope.com/blog/body-image-technologyKim, S. (2019). Kids, body image and technology. Endangered Bodies. https://www.endangeredbodies.org/kids_body_image_and_technology USE THESE COMMENTS AND EDIT THE POEM1. “Tech Mirror” is a solid poem.
2. Excellent topic.
3. The stanza that is the strongest to me (as the reader) is:
Media has shaped and permeated the diet culture
Photoshopped images of men and women rule the internet “to enhance their beauty, with artificial intelligent apps”
Reality and falsification cannot be told apart
Yet we all feel attached to the technology
Almost everyone has become a pet to the technology”
4. Consider adding more pop culture references.
5. Consider shifting the format a bit.
6. Good references.